Is Your Novel Ready to Be Written?
Developing a novel consists of hours spent with your imagination churning, connecting dots in a cloud of fiction. It's an exciting time, working out our first book idea. We're like the clichéd, obsessed character in movies with long strands of string connecting photos, maps, and notes all pinned to a corkboard. And that is how it has to be, at least in your mind, if you're serious about completing the book.
I like a clean workspace and tend to write almost exclusively from my imagination and memory. I am not a note taker. To begin a novel, I start an outline in Notepad and hash out the first ten scenes or so. That is usually the extent of my notes. And with both of my novels, I have deviated from this short outline, preferring to work off-the-cuff.
Some writers outline their entire book, thinking things out in advance. I’ve tried that, but usually come up with a better idea in the midst of composition. It is difficult to really get to know my characters until I have put them through the paces. I think outlining a novel is a great way to keep it organized, and helps the writer retain a larger element of control. It simply isn’t for me.
Whether you are an outliner/note taker or not, the tricky part is knowing if your story idea can support an entire novel. We're talking upwards of 50K-60K words, at minimum. If that sounds daunting, do not fret, it is easier than you think. I've written two novels (about to begin work on the third), and I assure you the length of your story hinges more on your idea and how many directions you can take the story.
For example, in my first novel, I wanted to write a ghost story about a teenage boy, with a troubled past, who was living in a haunted hotel. There were so many options between describing events happening at the hotel, the boy's past, the history of the hotel, and building relationships between characters, that I felt the story could endure. The final version came out to around 70K words.
The same held true for my second novel. I filled it with so many characters, all of whom have an agenda, that the story couldn't help but spill over the 60K mark.
By contrast, I've always wanted to write a novel with just two characters trapped somewhere. It would be heavy on dialogue (which I love to write) and be character-focused, instead of plot-focused. Unfortunately, at this time, I do not have the necessary skills to pull a story like off. Not if I want it to be novel-length. I could milk it for 10K words, if I'm lucky, but that is about it.
At this point in my writing career, I need to have a lot going on to sustain a novel. The focus of the story is what determines whether the book is popular fiction or literary fiction. Popular fiction is plot focused and for me is the easier of the two types to write. Literary fiction is character focused and requires a little for finesse to move the story along. It is a skill I work on every time I write.
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Look for the complete article by returning guest blogger Kendall Bailey (@KBaileyWriter) later today on The Official Prose. Blog at: blog.theprose.com.
NYC
in a room in Manhattan
up off 34th Street
writing away the desperation
and hustle I heard
from the window
I hardly used my radio
the sounds from down there
were plenty
the litanies of anger, hurry,
frustration, gridlock
and after the first week I started
wearing headphones when I wrote
but I was always aware
of the window
I was young and
I had never seen so many assholes
trying to be important
-walking quickly
black clothes
gripping briefcases
or paintings
or portfolios
or black umbrellas
I watched the urchins move
and I wanted to pick
them off
one by one
from the window
I didn’t work anywhere at the time
I didn’t want to
sometimes I would
take the train to Brooklyn
and walk around the Jews
and I would anger one here
and there
by asking where the nearest
bar was
or where I could score
a bag of
good shit
or where I could find
a cheap homosexual
or the nearest
strip club
the look of hatred satisfied me
and when I wasn’t doing
that
I would take a taxi around the
city for a few miles
and jump out and run
but the best was
when I would drive
my smoking engine
downtown in the traffic
doing 15 miles an hour
in the left lane, cutting off
taxi cabs and long
black limousines
and SUVs.
The truth was I hated New York City
that so-called energy
and lack of courtesy
of basic convenience
I pulled some alright
pages out of that place
Dostoevsky wrote that a city can be intentional
I felt
no intent from Manhattan
it didn’t have me trapped
there like so many others
and for that the city just gave me
a hard stare
it was tolerant
with me
it could not break me
because
I knew it was
only
joking.
It’s Okay
It's okay if you want to sit by yourself at lunch.
It's okay if you're not part of the popular clique.
It's okay if you're not the skinniest.
It's okay to make mistakes.
It's okay if not everyone likes you.
It's okay to be yourself, in fact, that's the only true way to get by.
Be yourself and don't let anyone tell you that that's not good enough. If you're a girl and you want to cut your hair short, go ahead. If you're a boy who likes the color pink, so what. Love who you can but fend for yourself.
Dear Mr. President
Dear Mr. President:
First and foremost, please know that I deeply respect the responsibility that you've chosen to undertake. I can only imagine how stressful and challenging your job is. With that in mind, allow me to list several pieces of advice that might serve as inspiration for future executive decisions.
1) EDUCATION
Public teachers need to be paid higher salary and need to be hired more carefully. We need to make the profession of being a teacher as culturally and economically prestigious and rewarding as being a doctor or lawyer.
2) CRIME
We need to transition from a punitive justice system into one that serves to heal and transform citizens who fall victim to criminal activity. Ultimately, it isn't their fault, it's the system's fault, and it's in your power to optimize this system. We shouldn't punish criminals. We should give them the opportunity to heal.
3) MILITARY
We need to cut military spending significantly...period.
4) CLIMATE
We need to free ourselves from fossil fuel dependence entirely within the next 20 years. Share that vision with the world and inspire humanity to make it real. We have plenty of sun, electricity, and other, cleaner means of utility than oil.
5) ECONOMY
Invest several billions of dollars annually into social entrepreneurs and entrepreneurship. It's by definition the greatest possible economic win-win.
I appreciate your taking the time to read and consider this message.
Yours,
---A
A not-so-trivial pursuit.
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Age?
Some say I'm not old enough to understand
others know I am
Some say I'm still naïve
maybe I am
I don't know who I am or what I believe exactly
I'm not sure I even believe in me
I get this comment a lot 'you seem older than that'
I see no offense in that
I'm discovering life's different from what people say
and that there are times when things seem like they're never ok
I still occasionally get seen as a child, but hey, it is what it is
I still have a lot of my life to live
Standoff
How did the Cold War end without a shot being fired? Over forty thousand nukes were online to be launched. Millions of troops were facing each other. But it all ended with a guy using a sledgehammer in Berlin. How did this happen?
I know....would you like to know? It's not what you think. The names will be changed to protect the stupid and inept.