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EchoStanback
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EchoStanback

Confessions of a Persian Rug

I was beautiful once. I remember being beautiful. I was bright and bold, I brought color to their lives.

Then they began to use me. I was exposed to the world and the ones who were supposed to love and care for me began to put me down and once I was down they kicked me and kept kicking until I felt I would never stand tall again.

What could I do but lie there and take it?

They would walk all over me without even looking down. They would walk over me without thought, without even knowing I was there. I might as well have been part of the furniture.

I sit back and wonder why must they walk all over me? I guess you might say because I allow it. I do suppose it was my fault for laying there so long.

Why did I accept this mistreatment you ask? Maybe I got used to laying there, maybe I got used to them walking over me. You can get used to anything if you take it long enough. You might say I should get up and leave if I don't like it but don't you know that I can't?

Challenge
Dead Pets
Write about a beloved pet who passed on. Nonfiction prose.
EchoStanback in Nonfiction

Deeply and Terribly

I'm ashamed to admit that you got on my nerves. And I didn't always do my best. I tried to make up for it in the end though I suppose it didn't matter. I'm still here, missing you deeply and terribly.

Challenge
Use A Metaphor To Broach An Uncomfortable Topic.
Stretch it to the limits.
EchoStanback

Confessions of a Persian Rug

I was beautiful once. I remember being beautiful. I was bright and bold, I brought color to their lives. I loved them. They were my family.

Then they began to use me. I was exposed to the world and the ones who were supposed to love and care for me began to put me down and once I was down they kicked me and kept kicking until I felt I would never stand tall again.

I told myself to lie there and take it because they'd had a hard day and who wouldn't like somewhere to kick their feet up after a day like that?

I noticed how easily they could walk over me without even looking down. They would walk over me without thought, without even knowing I was there. I might as well have been part of the furniture. I grew dull. I curled in on myself and gathered dust.

I sit back and wonder why must they walk all over me? I guess you might say because I allow it. I do suppose it was my fault for laying there so long.

Why did I accept this mistreatment you ask? Maybe I got used to laying there, maybe I got used to them walking all over me. You can get used to anything if you take it long enough. You might say I should get up and leave if I don't like it but don't you know that I can't?

Challenge
Walked Upon
You are a once colorful and valued Persian carpet...now faded and tread bare. Who walked upon you? Poetry or prose.
Cover image for post Everyday Usage, by EchoStanback
EchoStanback

Everyday Usage

I was beautiful once. I remember being beautiful. I was bright and bold, I brought color to their lives. I loved them. They were my family.

Then they began to use me. I was exposed to the world and the ones who were supposed to love and care for me began to put me down and once I was down they kicked me and kept kicking until I felt I would never stand tall again.

I told myself to lie there and take it because they'd had a hard day and who wouldn't like somewhere to kick their feet up after a day like that?

I noticed how easily they could walk over me without even looking down. They would walk over me without thought, without even knowing I was there. I might as well have been part of the furniture. I grew dull. I curled in on myself and gathered dust.

I sit back and wonder why must they walk all over me? I guess you might say because I allow it. I do suppose it was my fault for laying there so long.

Why did I accept this mistreatment you ask? Maybe I got used to laying there, maybe I got used to them walking all over me. You can get used to anything if you take it long enough. You might say I should get up and leave if I don't like it but don't you know that I can't?

Challenge
Challenge of the Week LXXIV
This week, we tackle a poetic classic, the sonnet. Your sonnet can be Petrarchan, Shakespearean, or if you're particularly brave, you can try your hand at some other avant-garde variation. We recommend you read a few sonnets before attempting your own. We'll be looking for sophistication, originality, and beauty.
EchoStanback in Poetry & Free Verse

Own Me

Own me as you do your shoe or that lamp over there

You enjoy it

The thrill of chase lights fires in your piercing stare

I deplore it

I wonder who your mother was and why she failed you

It’s deceptive

The mask of mild intentions thinly veiled you

I accept it

Spurn me until you need your shoes or that lamp over there

I dare you

I will immerse you in darkness and leave your feet bare

That scares you?

I do not stop to judge you, for I know you too well

All my life, far too long to dawdle and dwell

Challenge
Why so serious?
EchoStanback in Comedy

So Serious

You always ask the same questions and then forget the answer.

You made me this way.

Okay?

You made me.

And there's no other way to be.

Not at this point.

I'm serious.

Challenge
Label Yourself
EchoStanback

I'm... lost

I'm... often dissapointed

I'm... scared of talking

I'm... a dreamer

I'm... a pessimist

I'm... always thinking that my own dreams are stupid

I'm... tiered

I'm... a push-over

I'm... tiered of being a push-over

I'm... scared